STAR HardProbes PWG

[tc88qy <tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Wei

 Very nice slides. I have few comments and suggestions for your 
consideration.
1)page 4, with iTPC upgrades the TPC acceptance has been extend to 
|eta|<1.5
2)page 5, you may talk about STAR published RAA first, then talk about 
the physics opportunity
from BES-II data. The red box on the RAA plot is confusion. If you want 
to emphasize the energy, you may highlight the energy on x axis.
3)swapping  page 4 and page 5.
4)page 6, remove regeneration dominates at LHC energies.
5)Page 9, Isobar collisions statistics needs to be consistent within 
collaboration.
6)Page 12&13, the title should be different from page 11, it is a double 
ratio plots.

Qian Yang

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