STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Isaac,

Thank you for implementing comments from your dry run.

Some comments:
Slide8:
Please update jet v1 cartoon from Sooraj once he updates his slides.
We have a good cartoon now depicting path length and tilted bulk 
geometry.

slide10:
As you are showing Rcp (left) and Rcp(0.4)/Rcp(0.2) (right plot) on the 
same slide, using "ratio" in the first bullet is a bit confusing.
Please rephrase or make it clear to avoid confusion on this side.

Thank you
Nihar


On 2024-09-20 19:03, Mooney, Isaac wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> With trip prep, I didn’t quite have time to implement all the Yale
> comments, so the v3 now uploaded to the node will probably be updated
> further while I’m on the plane (boarding soon). But feel free to
> give comments on this version, with the caveat that there are a couple
> of placeholders and physics messaging will still be improved.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
> > On Sep 19, 2024, at 16:01, Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > v2 uploaded now with comments from the STAR practice talk addressed.
> > Will be uploading a v3 with comments from the Yale group implemented
> > as well. Not sure yet of the timescale for that version as I need to
> > prepare for the trip tonight.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > On Sep 18, 2024, at 22:27, Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
> > wrote:
> > Hi all,
> >
> > Trimmed version (v1) uploaded now (aesthetics still to be improved).
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > On Sep 18, 2024, at 20:01, Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hi all,
> >
> > This is a rough draft of the talk. The organizers today let us know
> > that the talks in this session are 15’+5’. So I am in the
> > process of significantly trimming down. I’ll upload a new draft
> > when that is done, but wanted to let you see the talk as soon as
> > possible. PS I am aware that the aesthetics are not good right now
> > — I will improve them in a future version.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > On Sep 18, 2024, at 19:55, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> >
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Isaac Mooney (isaac.mooney AT yale.edu) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
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