STAR HardProbes PWG

[Anders Knospe <ank220 AT lehigh.edu>]

Brennan: please send me a message as soon as you are available. I want to jump on Zoom with you and go through the comments point by point to ensure that they are properly and fully implemented. There is not enough time left for email tag. Please let me know when you are available.

On Monday, September 23, 2024, Rosi Reed <rosijreed AT lehigh.edu> wrote:

Hi Brennan,

I agree with Barbara here - I think you need to reorder the information on the slides.  Basically, it should go:

Things you do to select events

Things you do to select tracks

What you do with the tracks

How you extract the Signal

Then the extracted signal

Technically you would then follow that with what the extracted signal means, though I think we've agreed to keep interpretation to a minimum.

In the latest version you're still missing a lot of the details of your analysis - I think you can add some of these things that you should already have on slides you've made to flesh out the content and to satisfy the requests.

Regards,

Rosi

On Mon, Sep 23, 2024 at 7:59 AM Barbara Trzeciak <barbara.trzeciak AT gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Brennan,

I would say it's better to first describe how you extract the signal (dataset, selection, electron reconstruction etc.) and then show the extracted signal.

Cheers,

Barbara

On Mon, Sep 23, 2024 at 1:17 PM Brennan Schaefer <brs521 AT lehigh.edu> wrote:

Hi Barbara, I've adjusted the order repeatedly and I'm lost.  I don't know how to satisfy both of these:

Rosi:  The story is muddled here, the invariant mass plots are towards the end - and the analysis procedure happens prior to the signal extraction.

Barbara: the signal extraction should be after the analysis procedure

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