STAR HardProbes PWG

[Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu>]

Hi Nihar,

Thanks for the comments! I have uploaded a new version ("QM_abstract_110424.pdf") on drupal.

Best,

Youqi

On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 8:16 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Youqi,

Thank you for your nice abstract, please find my comments below.

title: AT STAR -> by STAR [better to avoid AT multiple times in title]
L8: the two novel
L10: …reconstructed in pp collisions at sort{s}=200 GeV at the STAR
experiment.
L12: the NLL SCET
L16: Our measurement indicates at a correlation between… -> If you could
paraphrase that would be good. Not clear.
L19: We also present the r_c measurement that probes the contributions
of …
L23: We discuss possible reasons for such discrepancy. -> Finaly, we
discuss the physics implications from these model comparisons.

  Best
Nihar

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