STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Youqi,

Thanks for addressing the comments. I sign off. 

-Isaac

On Nov 6, 2024, at 18:41, Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Isaac,

Thanks for the comments! I have uploaded a new version "QM_abstract_110624.pdf" to drupal.

Best,

Youqi

On Wed, Nov 6, 2024 at 6:24 PM Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Youqi,

See below for some comments on your nice abstract.

Thanks,

Isaac

19. “at which the first hard splitting happens."

Be careful of consistency with tense: e.g. sometimes it’s present tense: “we present” and sometimes it’s past: “We compared", "we measured", … I would stick with present tense throughout.

On Nov 5, 2024, at 15:17, Youqi Song <youqi.song AT yale.edu> wrote:

Hi Qian,

Thanks for the comments. I have uploaded a new version "QM_abstract_110524.pdf" on drupal.

Best,

Youqi

On Mon, Nov 4, 2024 at 9:23 PM tc88qy <tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Youqi

  Nice Abstract, I have one suggestion.
You may explain a litter bit more about what is CD mass or give a 
reference to it. It is a new observable, in case people not familiar 
with it.

Qian Yang

On 2024-11-05 05:22, Youqi Song wrote:
> Hi Nihar,
> 
> Thanks for the comments! I have uploaded a new version
> ("QM_abstract_110424.pdf") on drupal.
> 
> Best,
> Youqi
> 
> On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 8:16 AM Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> wrote:
> 
>> Hello Youqi,
>> 
>> Thank you for your nice abstract, please find my comments below.
>> 
>> title: AT STAR -> by STAR [better to avoid AT multiple times in
>> title]
>> L8: the two novel
>> L10: …reconstructed in pp collisions at sort{s}=200 GeV at the
>> STAR
>> experiment.
>> L12: the NLL SCET
>> L16: Our measurement indicates at a correlation between… -> If you
>> could
>> paraphrase that would be good. Not clear.
>> L19: We also present the r_c measurement that probes the
>> contributions
>> of …
>> L23: We discuss possible reasons for such discrepancy. -> Finaly, we
>> 
>> discuss the physics implications from these model comparisons.
>> 
>> Best
>> Nihar
>> 
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