STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Gabe,

No it’s not distracting to include jet shapes, I just wanted to make sure what was promised was what you meant to promise. But thanks for addressing the comments. I sign off. 

-Isaac

On Nov 6, 2024, at 23:44, Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Gabe,

Thank you for your nice abstract.
I don't have any comments other than Isaac's.
I sign off.

Best
Nihar
On 2024-11-07 04:05, Mooney, Isaac wrote:

Hi Gabe,
See below for some comments on your nice abstract.
Thanks,
Isaac
13. Either “studied as a function of [singular noun]” or “studied with
jet selections ___” So e.g. “Of jet radius ($R = …$) and jet
constituent pT selection (p_T^const…)” But given that in the next
sentence you talk about the dependent variable of the plots being pT
and \Delta R, maybe here it makes more sense to use the latter
formulation to avoid redundancy.
14.
 "> 2.0, 3.0 GeV/c"
I usually use “cons” for constituents since “const” is a common
abbreviation of “constant”. It’s not confusing for people in the field
since it’s clear from context, but might as well avoid the risk
altogether.
16. Do you mean published measurements here? If so would be good to
specify “alongside published jet shapes…”

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