STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Gabe,

Thank you for your nice abstract.
I don't have any comments other than Isaac's.
I sign off.

Best
Nihar
On 2024-11-07 04:05, Mooney, Isaac wrote:
> Hi Gabe,
>
> See below for some comments on your nice abstract.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
> 13. Either “studied as a function of [singular noun]” or “studied with
> jet selections ___” So e.g. “Of jet radius ($R = …$) and jet
> constituent pT selection (p_T^const…)” But given that in the next
> sentence you talk about the dependent variable of the plots being pT
> and \Delta R, maybe here it makes more sense to use the latter
> formulation to avoid redundancy.
> 14.
>          "> 2.0, 3.0 GeV/c"
>         I usually use “cons” for constituents since “const” is a common
> abbreviation of “constant”. It’s not confusing for people in the field
> since it’s clear from context, but might as well avoid the risk
> altogether.
> 16. Do you mean published measurements here? If so would be good to
> specify “alongside published jet shapes…”
>
> > On Oct 31, 2024, at 13:28, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> >
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Gabriel Dale-Gau (gdaleg2 AT uic.edu) has submitted a material for a 
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69826
> >
> > Deadline: 2024-10-31
> > ---
> > If you have any problems with the review process, please contact
> > webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov