STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Sijie and Meowu,

Thank you for this nice merged abstract.

I have two comments below, with these implemented I sign off.

Title: "Investigation..." -> "Measurement... ";
at STAR -> by STAR [multiple use of at]
_ "As the data is unique in the near future,"  -> Not needed. Remove it.
_ "...future, these measurements represents a..." -> These measurements 
provide a...

Best
Nihar

On 2024-11-07 08:21, Sijie Zhang wrote:
> Hi Isaac,
>
> Thanks for your comments. I have uploaded a new version:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2025_merged_abstract_v4.pdf
>
> Regards,
> Sijie
>
> > 2024年11月7日 06:49，Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
> > 写道：
> >
> > Hi Sijie and Maowu,
> >
> > See below for some comments on your nice merged abstract.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Isaac
> >
> > 4. “Jet quenching — modifications to the energy… — serves as
> > a… (dashes rather than commas)
> > 12. “And O+O collisions”
> > 21. Similar comment as I had on the APS abstract: "I understand why
> > you wrote this, but I would remove the last clause “and are
> > complementary…”. Of course it will be great to see OO results at
> > LHC energies as well, and compare to the extent possible. However, I
> > think your abstract should highlight that these data are unique in
> > the world for the near future, and yours would be the first
> > measurement of its kind to be done in OO anywhere. When the LHC has
> > taken OO data in 2025, they can write in their abstracts that they
> > are complementary to existing measurements at RHIC.” — In this
> > case, I would recommend removing the last sentence and mentioning
> > instead that these measurements are unique, as I mention above ^^.
> >
> > > On Nov 1, 2024, at 03:54, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> > >
> > > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Sijie Zhang (sijiezhang AT mail.sdu.edu.cn) has submitted a material
> > > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69830
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2024-10-31
> > > ---
> > > If you have any problems with the review process, please contact
> > > webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov