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[Sijie Zhang <sijiezhang AT mail.sdu.edu.cn>]

Hi Isaac,

Thanks for your comments. I have uploaded a new version:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2025_merged_abstract_v4.pdf

Regards,

Sijie

2024年11月7日 06:49，Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu> 写道：

Hi Sijie and Maowu,

See below for some comments on your nice merged abstract.

Thanks,
Isaac

4. “Jet quenching — modifications to the energy… — serves as a… (dashes rather than commas)
12. “And O+O collisions”
21. Similar comment as I had on the APS abstract: "I understand why you wrote this, but I would remove the last clause “and are complementary…”. Of course it will be great to see OO results at LHC energies as well, and compare to the extent possible. However, I think your abstract should highlight that these data are unique in the world for the near future, and yours would be the first measurement of its kind to be done in OO anywhere. When the LHC has taken OO data in 2025, they can write in their abstracts that they are complementary to existing measurements at RHIC.” — In this case, I would recommend removing the last sentence and mentioning instead that these measurements are unique, as I mention above ^^.

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