STAR HardProbes PWG

["Mooney, Isaac" <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>]

Hi Sijie and Maowu,

See below for some comments on your nice merged abstract.

Thanks,
Isaac

4. “Jet quenching — modifications to the energy… — serves as a… (dashes 
rather than commas)
12. “And O+O collisions”
21. Similar comment as I had on the APS abstract: "I understand why you wrote 
this, but I would remove the last clause “and are complementary…”. Of course 
it will be great to see OO results at LHC energies as well, and compare to 
the extent possible. However, I think your abstract should highlight that 
these data are unique in the world for the near future, and yours would be 
the first measurement of its kind to be done in OO anywhere. When the LHC has 
taken OO data in 2025, they can write in their abstracts that they are 
complementary to existing measurements at RHIC.” — In this case, I would 
recommend removing the last sentence and mentioning instead that these 
measurements are unique, as I mention above ^^.

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