STAR HardProbes PWG

[tc88qy <tc88qy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Priyanka,

Nice Slides. Additional to Nihar's comments, please find my comments 
below:
Slide 4, Please give a reference to this page.
Slide 6, it is sqrt(pi) rather than sort(2) in equation (1).
Slide 12, If your analysis just used part of the data, then you should 
mention it.
Slide 13, Background is not shown in the plot (either SE-LS or MX-UL)
Slide 16,17 and 18, It will be good to point out how you deal with 
different spin states and its relative fraction.

Qian Yang


On 2024-11-18 13:14, Nihar Sahoo wrote:
> Hello Priyanka,
>
> Please find my comments on your nice slides.
>
> _Slide2: Please provide reference of this cartoon [ALICE experiment’s 
> probably]
>
> _Slide16, “STAR data shows no significant correlations, but the data
> is also consistent with theoretical model
> predictions with emission source size of 5 fm or larger” -> It is not
> correct. It is not consistent at low k*. Please correct it.
>
> _Similarly in Slide 17, It is consistent within uncertainty at low k*.
> Please clearly mention it.
>
> _Slid18:  “We do not observe significant correlations between D0-p
> pairs” -> on “Significant correlation”, who do you know this is not
> significant? I think at low k* we see some correlation., but you have
> larger bin size so last point only shows this correlation. Is not it?
>
>
> _Slide19:  Either you drop this slide with “place holder” or you
> finalise this slide  before we sign off.
>
>
> Best
> Nihar
>
>
> On 2024-11-18 02:50, "Roy Chowdhury Priyanka (DOKT)" wrote:
> > Dear all,
> >
> >  Please have a look at the submitted slides for the upcoming Zimanyi
> > school. Slides are almost similar as WPCF with a place holder in slide
> > no. 19, which should be finalized soon.
> >
> >  Regards,
> >  Priyanka
> >
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