STAR HardProbes PWG

[Nihar Sahoo <nihar AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Monika,

Thank you for your nice slides. I don't have any comments. I sign off.

Best
Nihar

On 2024-11-21 18:23, Robotkova, Monika wrote:
> Hi Isaac,
>  Thank you for your useful comments, I've implemented them and
> uploaded new version on Drupal.
>
>  Best regards,
>  Monika
>
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>
> Od: star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov <star-hp-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov>
> za uživatele Mooney, Isaac <isaac.mooney AT yale.edu>
> Odesláno: středa 20. listopadu 2024 22:41
> Komu: star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov <star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Předmět: Re: [[Star-hp-l] ] STAR presentation by Monika Robotkova
> for Zimanyi School 2024 submitted for review
>
> Hi Monika,
>
> I have a few comments on your well-written slides, below.
>
> Thanks,
> Isaac
>
> 11. Later in passing you mention the motivation for Collinear Drop (s.
> 15), but since you give the physics motivation for Soft Drop on this
> slide, it would also be good to mention the motivation for Collinear
> Drop.
>
> 14. It would be good to specify the directionality in the second
> bullet -- so, "we move from non-perturbative to perturbative region by
> increasing Rg" or similar.
>
> 17. Rather than the transition region shifting with momentum, I would
> emphasize the universality of the transition region when scaled by
> momentum. This contains the information in your current second bullet
> and adds additional information as well.
>
> 19.
>         You mention that the data are captured by MC models and
> theoretical predictions, but we've seen for the EEC and similarly for
> rc, that models aren't simultaneously able to describe the
> distribution of charge information within the jets. I think this is
> nice to point out since it shows that pp is not a solved problem --
> there is still interesting work to be done. It wouldn't need to have
> its own slide, but maybe a bullet point on s. 17 with a citation, and
> mentioned again on this slide.
>         For the outlook to A+A collisions, this makes it seem as if no
> substructure measurements have been done in A+A collisions at STAR
> yet, but e.g. the generalized angularities have a preliminary
> measurement. Of course, you don't need to include every STAR result in
> your talk, but would be good to make it clear that some work has been
> done already on this.
>
> > On Nov 19, 2024, at 17:12, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:
> >
> > Dear Star-hp-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Monika Robotkova (robotmon AT fjfi.cvut.cz) has submitted a material
> for a
> > review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69940
> >
> > Deadline: 2024-12-02
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