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[Michael Tuts <tuts AT pmtuts.net>]

Hi John,
Thanks for the comments ... will have a look.
Cheers, Mike

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Subject: Re: [Usatlas-hllhc-l2deputymgmt-nsf-l] 2021-06-15 Directors Review 
for NSF MREFC Annual review - Tuts.pptx


Hi Mike,

        I give a few comments below.

                John

p. 3 - put DoE scope in different color scheme, to separate it more clearly?  
(I do this in LAr)

p. 5 - not the best org. chart to show, since most of the PL for operations 
need to be at CERN so there are fewer US people.  More relevant (and more US 
people) would be to show HL-LHC org chart?

p. 16 (and elsewhere) - while I don't mind directing the focus elsewhere, I 
am just pointing out that the Columbia LAr spending never shows up in such 
reports since we are not a SUBcontract

p. 17 - we have "COVID Actuals" and "COVID BCPs", which (as has been widely 
discussed) don't agree precisely.  Which do you mean by "current COVID cost 
to date"?

p. 21 - plot is very confusing (at least to me)

p. 23 - I would add "university closures" at the front of the list of COVID 
impacts, since we were all shut down for at least 3 months, right when the 
MREFC started; particularly terrible timing!


On 6/12/21 3:53 PM, Michael Tuts wrote:
> Hi All,
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> My draft talk. Comments are always welcome.
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> Thanks, Mike
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