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[John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

Gustaaf's comment near the bottom of p. 8 that is should be FDR and not 
PRR is correct; well spotted!

        John

On 4/27/23 6:50 AM, Gustaaf Brooijmans wrote:
> Hi Mike,
>
> I went a little beyond fact-checking, but they can ignore my corrections 
> of typos etc.  I don’t see any factual errors, but there are a few cases 
> where I think what’s written isn’t what they meant.
>
> Best,
>
> Gustaaf
>
>
>
>
> > On Apr 26, 2023, at 3:25 PM, Michael Tuts <tuts AT pmtuts.net 
> > <mailto:tuts AT pmtuts.net>> wrote:
> >
> > Hi L2 & L2D,
> > Attached is the draft written report from the NSF review. Please fact 
> > check the report (and share as needed). Please get back to us by 
> > Friday morning at the latest.
> > As we have said before, all did a great job at the review and the 
> > outcome is also excellent!
> > Thanks, PO
> > *From:*Coles, Mark W. <mcoles AT nsf.gov <mailto:mcoles AT nsf.gov>>
> > *Sent:*Wednesday, April 26, 2023 9:13 AM
> > *To:*Michael Tuts <tuts AT pmtuts.net <mailto:tuts AT pmtuts.net>>
> > *Cc:*Shank, James T. <jshank AT nsf.gov <mailto:jshank AT nsf.gov>>; Stein, 
> > Erica M. <estein AT nsf.gov <mailto:estein AT nsf.gov>>; Funes, Facundo M. 
> > <fmfunes AT nsf.gov <mailto:fmfunes AT nsf.gov>>
> > *Subject:*DRAFT ATLAS Rebaseline Review Report for fact checking
> > Dear Mike
> > The review panel has completed their draft report from last week’s NSF 
> > review of the rebaseline plan for the ATLAS HL upgrade. Would you and 
> > your colleagues please review the draft for factual errors and provide 
> > feedback within a few days? Because of other constraints on the 
> > availability of the panelists, I would like to have the review panel 
> > finalize their report sometime next week.
> > Please let me know if you have any questions.
> > Best regards,
> > Mark
> > <National Science Foundation- ATLAS Detector High Luminosity Upgrade 
> > DRAFT for fact 
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