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[John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

Hi Hong,

        I give below some comments on your draft slides.

                        John


General - remove the "template" slides (eg. 4, 10, 12, ...) and keep 
just the slides of your actual talk

p. 2 - remove spurious boxes

p. 8 - use consistent capitalization in table
  - change last 2 lines to "US+French", since BNL design was chosen

p. 11 - "Development of ALFE2 BGA package..."

p. 12 - include dimensions? maybe also remind this is 130 nm TSMC?

p. 13 - "test boards" (ie. plural)
  - back on p. 11 you said DAC was integrated on chip, so could be 
confusing that you talk about DAC here.  I assume it was just an option 
for testing, but only the on-chip blocks were used in the results shown?
 - move ALFE2 ASIC to top of list of components, since obviously it is 
the most important one

p. 15 - include noise specs.  Also would be a good place to "remind" 
that the ALFE noise is about 2X lower than LAUROC

p. 17/18 - again, include specs. to make clear they are met

p. 18 - make clear SUM is the Trigger Sum

p. 21 - we can give you a photo of the testboard showing the ALFE2 and 
COLUTAv4 on the same board

p. 26 - I know this comes here in the template, but I think you should 
move this earlier in the talk, so they understand the results you show. 
I would put it after slide 7

p. 27 - "A robotic test system is being set up ..."
  - the QC doc was a previous review rec. that we say we have met, so 
you should not say it is "being prepared" since that contradicts

p. 35 - moved "since 2017" to after "worked together"
 - mention here that risk has been reduced recently given advanced state

p. 37 - robot will need some ES&H considerations; worth mentioning?

p. 40-41 - I think you put these in backup and include here only a 
summary of COVID and non-COVID

p. 43 - you are surprised that you are 60% done??

p. 47 - we say ~100k here but 117.6k(?) on next slide?

p. 55 - mark the completed ones, similar to how you do on p. 54?

p. 63 - "the Premp/Shaper ASIC"













On 9/15/22 2:43 PM, Ma, Hong wrote:
>                  I uploaded the link to BOE and draft slides (not in docdb 
> yet).
>                  I don’t think I need to change the BOE, so it is still the 
> same version as that for DR.  I did update the Traceability table to indicate 
> one of the iterm is completed.
>
>                  The slides are still work-in-progress.
>
>                  Hong.
>
>
> From: Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on 
> behalf of John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
> Date: Thursday, September 15, 2022 at 2:26 PM
> To: usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov 
> <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l] weekly mtg
>
> Hi all,
>
>          I will be offline tomorrow, and some others are away also, so I am
> cancelling tomorrow's weekly meeting.
>          A couple updates:
>
> - thanks to the NSF L3s for their inputs to the NSF annual report, which
> I am combining and will send to Mike Tuts this evening
>
> - I have produced an updated version of my draft L2 talk for the CD-2/3
> review.  You can find the new version linked from last week's agenda,
> ie. https://indico.bnl.gov/event/17071/.  I ask Hong and Hao to put
> their draft L3 talks in docdb asap and put the link also on that indico
> page.  Once they are available, I would greatly appreciate if everyone
> could take a look at the draft slides and send feedback.
>
>          Regards,
>                  John
>
> On 9/8/22 5:39 PM, John Parsons wrote:
> > Hi all,
> >
> >       We will meet this week on Friday.  The indico page is at
> > https://indico.bnl.gov/event/17071/.
> >       Regards,
> >               John
>
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