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Date: Sunday, February 26, 2023 at 11:02 AM
To: Tim Andeen <tandeen AT utexas.edu>
Cc: usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l] comments of slides for NSF DR
Hi Tim,
Thanks. If you upload the iterated version of your slides to the same
docdb link, it should automatically be updated on Indico. Just be sure
to have visible by "public".
Regards,
John
On 2/25/23 6:25 PM, Tim Andeen wrote:
> Hi John,
>
> Thanks, I took your suggestions and made the changes (and fixed a few
> more typos). It’s in docdb, I guess we email Rhoumela to fix the links?
> I also took a quick look at your slides.
>
> On your L2 slides:
>
> p13 - **/21 in second to last bullet looks like a place holder?
>
> On your L3 slides:
>
> p14 - could add when LSB2s arrive at Columbia, when FEB2s are delivered
> to CERN
>
> p16 - could add names of Columbia/Pitt ESH people (my sides have
> Kathleen Crowley,
>
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> -Tim
>
> On Feb 25, 2023 at 1:02:25 PM, John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu
> <mailto:parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>> wrote:
>>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> I looked over the various talks for the DR, and they are all in good
>> shape. I give some comments/suggestions below.
>>
>> John
>>
>>
>> Tim
>> -----
>> pp. 6-7 - these numbers have not changed, so you should just flash them
>> to have time to focus on changes
>>
>> p. 8 - COLUTA does not meet the "<100 mW per channel" spec, which at FDR
>> was agreed to be changed (but I don't know if we formally changed it).
>> For now, just delete this spec. from the slide
>> - since you mention the downlink speed, maybe add the 10.24 Gbps
>> uplink speed?
>>
>> p. 9 - some variation in font size in table; is this intentional?
>>
>> p. 16 - BER limit should be 10^-17 (not 10^17)
>>
>> p. 17 (or somewhere) - add that first preprod. wafers just arrived at
>> CERN?
>>
>> p. 20 - you mention "testing 80 prototypes from MPW run", but we have
>> only tested ~20 so far (in QFN). Maybe change this to the plan to test
>> 150 or so in BGA from extra dice ordered?
>>
>> p. 23 - add that can soon retire risk of additional ADC iteration, once
>> BGA is validated
>>
>> p. 24 - "... and the LAr Phase 1 upgrade." (ie. not Trigger
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Andy
>> -----
>> p. 7 - why do you have "ATLAS FDR and PRR ?" (you do not need that)
>>
>> p. 9 - change to "Will submit PCB for sRTM v2 in March 2023"
>> - also include previous and new numbers of boards
>>
>> p. 15... - still need to be completed
>>
>>
>>
>> Hong
>> -----
>> p. 1 - some formatting issues on our names...
>>
>> p. 3 - in my version of this slide for other reviews, I highlight the
>> last bullet of each in a different color to stress both DOE L4s are
>> "critical"
>>
>> p. 4 - put a box around the DOE scope?
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
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