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Hi John, The talk looks good to me - thanks! A few minor comments are appended below. The comment on slide 8 will affect all of our presentations, so everyone should weigh in on it. Thanks - Hal -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Hi John,

The talk looks good to me - thanks! A few minor comments are appended below. The comment on slide 8 will affect all of our presentations, so everyone should weigh in on it.

Thanks  -  Hal

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slide 2: remember to delete this slide

slide 8: We should decide on a naming convention for the two OKPP scope System Integration activities (points 2 and 3 in your first bullet group). Since we're going to be talking about these in multiple presentations/contexts, it would be good to always use the same language, which is consistent with what's in P6. I've been referring to these as "FEB2 System Integration" and "LASP System Integration". But these may not be the best choices. The P6 task groups are:

    6.04.04.01.03 FEB2 Production System Integration

    6.04.04.02.04 LASP Full Chain System Integration

Do you have a preference?

Note: this language is also used in slides 12,16,17

slide 20: I would suggest to change the wording of the 6.4.5(note typo in WBS) Preamp/Shaper bullet

    - (TKPP) implies to me that there is also Obective scope in the Preamp/Shaper.

    - You might consider adding a sub-bullet saying:

      "when complete this will achieve the TKPP scope for LAr"

slide 22: remember to remove this slide

slide 23: "2024 IPR" --> "2025 IPR" in 1st bullet

slide 24: remove green text box at bottom right

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Hi all,

        I have put a draft of my LAr L2 presentation for the upcoming DOE IPR

in docdb #1961.  There are still some backup slides to fill out, but the

main talk is ready for review.  Comments are welcome.

        Regards,

                John

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