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[John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>]

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Hi Hong,

        Very nice talk.  I give a few comments below.

                John

p. 13 - show a few more plots of parameters measured in QC?

p. 14/15 - why first show timeline to 1/18 and then further?  Could combine?

p. 19 - as we discussed, we actually retired this risk some time ago, so 
need to be "careful" how to present this point

p. 21 - is Kin Yip the ES&H contact?  (is this the same Kin Yip from 
MANY years ago for the original FEB work??)

p. 26 - "Risk register" (not registry)
  - maybe comment when you expect remaining risks to be retired?

p. 27 - add final sub-bullet that this will mark completion of TKPP for 
LAr system



On 5/5/26 9:47 PM, Ma, Hong wrote:
>       here is my L3 talk
> https://atlas-hllhc.docdb.bnl.gov/cgi-bin/private/ShowDocument?  
> docid=1966 <https://atlas-hllhc.docdb.bnl.gov/cgi-bin/private/  
> ShowDocument?docid=1966>
>
>       Best,
>
>       Hong.
>
> *From: *usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov <usatlas-hllhc- 
> lartl2l3-l-request AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of Parsons, John 
> <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
> *Date: *Tuesday, May 5, 2026 at 5:21 PM
> *To: *usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l AT lists.bnl.gov <usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3- 
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> *Subject: *[[Usatlas-hllhc-lartl2l3-l] ] Fwd: draft L2 LAr talk for DOE IPR
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> FYI
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> Hong/Hao, how are your L3 talks coming along?  They need to get posted
> to docdb soon.
>
>          John
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> Subject: Re: draft L2 LAr talk for DOE IPR
> Date: Tue, 5 May 2026 17:20:14 -0400
> From: John Parsons <parsons AT nevis.columbia.edu>
> To: us-atlas-hllhc-pmgmt-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> <us-atlas-hllhc-pmgmt-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, Hong Ma <hma AT bnl.gov>, Xu, Hao
> <haoxu AT bnl.gov>
> CC: Smith, Rosemarie <rsmith2 AT bnl.gov>
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>
> Hi all,
>
>          I have uploaded an iterated version of my LAr L2 presentation 
> to docdb
> #1961, after implementing comments from Hal/Hong/Penka.
>          Regards,
>                  John
>
> On 4/30/26 12:27 PM, John Parsons wrote:
>  >
>  > Hi all,
>  >
>  >      I have put a draft of my LAr L2 presentation for the upcoming DOE
>  > IPR in docdb #1961.  There are still some backup slides to fill out, but
>  > the main talk is ready for review.  Comments are welcome.
>  >
>  >      Regards,
>  >          John
>
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