NPPS Leadership Team

[Alexander Kiselev <kisselev AT mail.desy.de>]

  Torre,

  looks good to me, except for:

  the text indicates that the data throughput at HL-LHC and EIC are
comparable, which is hard to believe based on our current estimates.

  I'm not a native speaker, perhaps that's why the word 'fabric' does
not sound well for me, especially in a scientific context. But if you
absolutely want to use it in the title, can a couple of excessive 
instances in the text be eliminated?

  Also the 'and so on' can be safely removed from the third paragraph.

  Regards,
    Alexander.



On Thu, 5 Mar 2020, Torre Wenaus via Phys-npps-mgmt-l wrote:

> After mods and shortening, will submit it today with the listed keywords. 
> Final comments on text and keywords welcome.
>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fsipzVHFaD7AbowImjsMCisY_3wRsnh4pAdG4zrQUlw/edit*__;Iw!!P4SdNyxKAPE!XgCKvRXCTwI_Ma16hyRUbOjSKwWnUgZjboqHUbmYb7eAjesv5D6P_P8fivC2UkmZrB35ZoOe2OKFLA$ 
>   Torre
>
> On Fri, Feb 28, 2020 at 1:32 PM Torre Wenaus <wenaus AT gmail.com> wrote:
>
>       Hi all,
>
>       In answer to this call mentioned in last week’s NPPS meeting
>
>        o 
>
>           
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://lotf2020.hotcrp.com__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!XgCKvRXCTwI_Ma16hyRUbOjSKwWnUgZjboqHUbmYb7eAjesv5D6P_P8fivC2UkmZrB35ZoNhoSxctg$
>   
>
>       Kolja and I were asked to put together an EIC 1-pager and I was asked 
> for an HL-LHC 1-pager. I don’t have the imagination to create separate 
> 1-pagers for the two so they are one and the
>       same
>
>       https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fsipzVHFaD7AbowImjsMCisY_3wRsnh4pAdG4zrQUlw/edit?usp=sharing__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!XgCKvRXCTwI_Ma16hyRUbOjSKwWnUgZjboqHUbmYb7eAjesv5D6P_P8fivC2UkmZrB35ZoNrG5fQ9Q$ 
>
>       Comments appreciated.
>
>         Torre