STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Risa Nishitani <s2312412 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your comments.

I have revised the proceedings and you can find it in the following link;

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/56188

Please kindly let me know if you have further comments or suggestions.

Best regards,

Risa

2021年9月8日(水) 19:44 Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Dear Risa,

Please find below comments to your nice proceedings:

Abstract:

heavy ion -> heavy-ion

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 200 GeV

If you use p+p in the math mode, you should do the same for Au+Au (general comment to the whole draft)

Introduction:

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 200 GeV

Cumulants:

Please control numbering of your references, the reference [16] should change the number as it is cited after [6-8]

Data set:

30 (cm) -> 30 cm

2 (cm) -> 2 cm

1 (cm) -> 1 cm

Results:

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 200 GeV

Summary:

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 200 GeV (when you refer to Au+Au)

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s} = 200 GeV (when you refer to p+p)

at 200 GeV -> at \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 200 GeV (when you refer to Au+Au)

With those implemented I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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