STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo" <jballcap AT Central.UH.EDU>]

Dear Hanna, 

Thank you for your comment. I have implemented your comment, find the new version:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Hot-Quarks-2022/Fluctuations-Lambda-Multiplicity-Distribution-AuAu-collisions-sqrtsN-1

Best regards,

Jonathan Ball 

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Dear Jonathan,

I have general comment regarding your nice presentation.

In many places you put very long sentences. Try to avoid this. Put also this what is needed trying to reduce amount of text as much as possible.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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