STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Ball Cap, Jonathan Gonzalo" <jballcap AT Central.UH.EDU>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

 

Sorry for my late reply, I had some late suggestions from my advisor, mostly regarding figures and the organization of the presentation, I have added a new slide in the motivation to make the motivation less crowded.

I included your suggestions as well. I modified the acceptance plot so that it agrees with the positive beam rapidity convention. I included your suggestions for the summary and outlook.

Thank you for your signing off.

 

Best regards,

Jonathan Ball

 

 

From: Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l
Sent: Thursday, October 6, 2022 11:44 PM
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Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jonathan Gonzalo Ball Cap for Hot Quarks 2022 submitted for review

 

Hi Jonathan,

     Nice presentation.
     Please find my minor suggestions below :

     1. slide 5, add unit for <b>  : fm.
     2. slide 6, Acceptance plot, in your definition, what direction is
positive rapidity direction ?
                      Usually, for FXT mode, we use beam rapidity as the
positive direction. Please confirm and write down your convention.

     3. In the slides where you use proton results, please cite the two
STAR papers :
          1. STAR, Phys. Rev. Lett. 128, (2022) 202303.
          2. STAR, arXiv : 2209.11940

     4. Please make the summary more concise, only list the most
important items.
         and add some outlook items, if possible.
         You may also want to add an item discussing about the Flavor
Dependence freeze-out in the summary.


     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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