STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Jonathan,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my minor suggestions below :

    1. slide 5, add unit for <b>  : fm.
    2. slide 6, Acceptance plot, in your definition, what direction is 
positive rapidity direction ?
                     Usually, for FXT mode, we use beam rapidity as the 
positive direction. Please confirm and write down your convention.

    3. In the slides where you use proton results, please cite the two 
STAR papers :
         1. STAR, Phys. Rev. Lett. 128, (2022) 202303.
         2. STAR, arXiv : 2209.11940

    4. Please make the summary more concise, only list the most 
important items.
        and add some outlook items, if possible.
        You may also want to add an item discussing about the Flavor 
Dependence freeze-out in the summary.


    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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