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  • From: "Wensong Cao" <wensong814 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>
  • To: "webmaster" <webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>, "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio" <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
  • Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Wensong Cao for 18th National Conference on... got commented by Hanna Zbroszczyk
  • Date: Tue, 9 May 2023 22:29:22 +0800

Dear Hanna,

Thank you very much for your kind suggestions. I have carried out the suggestions. 

The link of new version is https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/KK_3GeV_v3.pdf

The talk is only 10 minutes long, maybe p6, p7 and p19 can be moved to backup?

Best regards,
Wensong

 
 
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From:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
Date:  Tue, May 9, 2023 08:37 PM
To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
Subject:  [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Wensong Cao for 18th National Conference on... got commented by Hanna Zbroszczyk
 
Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Hanna Zbroszczyk ( hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Wensong Cao ( wensong814 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/18th-National-Conference-Nuclear-Physics/Kaonplus-Kaonplus-Correlation-Function-AuAu-C

Comment:
Dear Wensong,
Please find my comments on your nice slides:
Slide 1: Add: Wensong Cao for the STAR Collaboration
please also add: Partially funded by DOE, and add the logo of DOE
Slide 5: add a space: loss(dE/dx) -> loss (dE/dx)
Slide 6: remove && from the bottom
Slide 7: explain in a few words what are merging and splitting effects, and 
add appropriate figures to illustrate the problem;
define \theta and \phi angles and state how big effects they are;
Slide 8: Add more details about the estimation of the finite detectors' 
resolution effect on the measured correlation functions
Slide 9: none of the discussed effects: splitting, merging, and detector's 
resolution is included in the estimation of systematic uncertainties; please 
include all of them to have your calculation complete
Slide: statistics(attractive) -> statistics (attractive) // add a space
Slide 11: function(q_inv) -> function (q_inv) // add a space
General comment: add additional info about data analyzed: year, statistics, 
selection criteria, etc.

Thanks,
Hanna

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