STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[EsumiShinIchi <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Rutik
Thank you very much for the nice poster, as I was asked by Sooraj to review 
your poster for the QM in order to help our very busy conveners, so I’m 
sending 
you some comments on your nice poster mostly for the minor things.

* You have two sets of data for eta=[-1,0] at mid-rapidity and for [-2,0] 
including 
  forward region. You have chosen to show your final results at "6. Results - 
II", 
  with blue for the mid-rapidity and red for including forward region, where 
I 
  would suggest reversing the color, since higher energy points are mostly at 
  mid-rapidity, right? You plot the corrected point left from the uncorrected 
one 
  for the red, but it is plotted on the right for the blue, so I would like 
to have 
  them plotted consistently by shifting always towards one side. I would also 
  shift the forward point to the left (lower energy) with respect to the 
mid-rapidity 
  point. Please make all the points larger and make them clearly visible. 
Please 
  plot differently for the model compared to the data. Is the correction 
applied 
  only for your data at 3GeV? What about higher energy points? 

* Concerning on the unfolding, I would still like to discuss with you why you 
  could have safely unfolded the mean pT in 1D, where I was expecting that 
  we would need 2D-unfolding in (charged multiplicity, mean pT) space, that 
  we can talk face-to-face during the actual QM-poster session and/or pre-QM, 
  see you soon. 

That’s all from my side. Thanks again for your nice poster. 
Best regards, ShinIchi

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