STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Dear Hanwen and All,

Here are my suggestions for this abstract:

1) line 7: I am not sure what do we mean by 'he relevant degree of freedom’. It is vague, we should make it clear here;

2) line 11: Replace 'Compared to the previous published measurements at STAR, which only considered protons and kaons, we newly include Λ and Ξ− together

with their antiparticles.’ by “This is a first systematic analysis of the collision energy and centrality dependence* measurements for strange-quark hadrons including K,  Λ and Ξ− and their corresponding anti-particles.”;

3) line 13 - last sentence: ==> “Physics implications will be discussed by comparing these new results with calculations from Lattice Gauge Theory, thermal model as we as a hadronic transport model."

With those are implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Nu

* I have suggested to show the data on different centrality, especially from the most peripheral bin. I have not seen the results yet.

On Feb 6, 2024, at 7:26 PM, 冯瀚文 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Convenors,
 This message may have been missed. Could you please have a look at this abstract?

Thanks and Best Regards.
Hanwen Feng 
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