STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Dear Hanwen and All,

Thank you for the updated abstract and results from peripheral collisions.
As one can clearly see that the collision centrality is quite weak, namely 
the results from non-central collisions display a similar energy dependence 
compared to that of central collisions. As a result, I think, the sensitivity 
on the degrees-of-freedom of the observable is under question. Therefore, I 
would suggest weaken the sentence in Line 7 - 'serve as a sensitive 
observable to distinguish between the partonic and hadronic degrees of 
freedom of the matter created in heavy-ion collisions’ by “may be used to 
study the change of phases in the matter created in heavy-ion collisions”.

With this implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,
Nu

> On Feb 7, 2024, at 9:40 AM, 冯瀚文 <hwfeng AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn> wrote:
> 
> Dear Nu,
> 
> Thanks for those valuable and detailed suggestions. The revised abstract 
> can be found here: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/hwfeng_CPOD2024_Abstract.pdf.
> 
> Suggestion 2 and 3 are implemented. As for Suggestion 1, the modification 
> is "the baryon-strangeness correlations serve as a sensitive observable to 
> distinguish between the partonic and hadronic degrees of freedom of the 
> matter created in heavy-ion collisions." I hope it is clear now.
> 
> The most peripheral result is presented here: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/hwfeng_CBS_70-80.pdf. Sorry 
> for the late response. Results on other centrality bins are plotted in a 
> compact form for convenient viewing: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/hwfeng_CBS_CompactForm.pdf. 
> Another version which is plotted individually can be found here: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/hwfeng_CBS_Individual.pdf.
> 
> Thanks and Best Regards,
> Hanwen Feng
> ------------------ Original ------------------
> From:  "Nu Xu"<nxu AT lbl.gov>;
> Date:  Wed, Feb 7, 2024 01:04 PM
> To:  "star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; 
> Cc:  "Nu Xu"<nxu AT lbl.gov>; "冯瀚文"<hwfeng AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>; 
> Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Hanwen Feng for CPOD 2024 
> submitted for review
>  Dear Hanwen and All,
> 
> Here are my suggestions for this abstract:
> 
> 1) line 7: I am not sure what do we mean by 'he relevant degree of 
> freedom’. It is vague, we should make it clear here;
> 
> 2) line 11: Replace 'Compared to the previous published measurements at 
> STAR, which only considered protons and kaons, we newly include Λ and Ξ− 
> together
> with their antiparticles.’ by “This is a first systematic analysis of the 
> collision energy and centrality dependence* measurements for strange-quark 
> hadrons including K,  Λ and Ξ− and their corresponding anti-particles.”;
> 
> 3) line 13 - last sentence: ==> “Physics implications will be discussed by 
> comparing these new results with calculations from Lattice Gauge Theory, 
> thermal model as we as a hadronic transport model."
> 
> With those are implemented, I sign off.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Nu
> 
> * I have suggested to show the data on different centrality, especially 
> from the most peripheral bin. I have not seen the results yet.
> 
> 
>> On Feb 6, 2024, at 7:26 PM, 冯瀚文 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Dear Convenors,
>>  This message may have been missed. Could you please have a look at this 
>> abstract?
>> 
>> Thanks and Best Regards.
>> Hanwen Feng 
>> ------------------ Original ------------------
>> From:  "webmaster--- via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>> Date:  Fri, Feb 2, 2024 12:12 PM
>> To:  "star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>; 
>> Cc:  "webmaster"<webmaster AT star.bnl.gov>; 
>> Subject:  [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Hanwen Feng for CPOD 2024 
>> submitted for review
>>  Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>> 
>> Hanwen Feng (hwfeng AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a 
>> review,  
>> please have a look:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66701
>> 
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