STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Rutik,

Thanks for submitting your presentation on time.

Find below my comments to improve:

Slide 1:

Please add „Partially funded by” and add logo of DOE

Move „the” to the next line

Slide 3:

Third bullet: energies >= 7.7 -> energies \sqrt{s_{NN}} >= 7.7

If the figure was not prepared by you, add a reference

Slide 5:

Second bullet reaches the description of the Y axis from the figure, please decrease fonts or make the figure smaller.

Slide 6: 

First bullet chromodynamics.[2] -> chromodynamics [2].

Refrenie: [2] : ALICE -> [2]: ALICE

Slide 7:

S. Gavin Phys. -> S. Gavin, Phys.

Slide 8:

S. Gavin Phys. -> S. Gavin, Phys.

Slide 9:

ALICE,Eur. -> ALICE, Eur.

Slide 10:

STAR,Phys. -> STAR, Phys.

Slide 12:

S. Gavin Phys. -> S. Gavin, Phys.

 

Slide 14:

 GeV , implying -> GeV, implying

Slide 16:

Transport -> transport

Kind regards,

Hanna

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