STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Ashik,
  Nice slides, here are my comments with these included I sign-off.

General comments:
1. Please point us to the link to plots that require  preliminary 
approval.
2. You have plots with "STAR, Au+Au.." and "STAR Preliminary" both 
written as labels. I suggest you convert "STAR," to "STAR Preliminary, 
Au+Au.." and remove the extra "STAR Preliminary" labels.
3. Be consistent about using "EM field" and "EM-Field".

Here are slide specific comments:

slide#2:
"First harmonic coefficient, v1, Fourier decomposition - Directed Flow"
-->
"First harmonic coefficient of Fourier decomposition v1 -> Directed 
Flow"

slide#2:
"What does drive the splitting" -> "What drives the splitting"

slide#3 title:
"EM field driven splitting (Δv1)? (1)" -- the number (1) is it needed ?

slide#3:
Remove either of "Beam direction is zˆ" and "Collisions along z-axis", 
they both make the same point.

slide#4:
Normally we refer reaction plane as Ψ_RP. B \perp to RP is approximate, 
they are definitely correlated. Make sure you explain it, at least 
during the talk.

slide#5 and 6 titles: instead of using numbers (3) or (4) you can just 
write Faraday or Hall effects.

slide#7:
Are you missing Coulomb effects?

slide#8:
"Towards measurements: STAR detector at BES-II"
->
"Measurement from STAR"

slide#8:
Add 2.1<|η|<5.1 for EPD and |η|>6.3 for ZDCs.

slide#8:
In "Data sets" mention the years.

slide#9:
Remove at BES-II from the title.

slide#10:
Please add a sentence about the diagram on this slide.

slide#11:
Maybe it's a good idea to bring the equations from previous slides here.

slide#12:
Maybe write we obtain seven independent equations. The texts in bullet 
below the table somehow looks smaller.

slide#15:
I think the four panel plot will be better showing 200 and 27 GeV 
separately for the talk.

Best,
Prithwish




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