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[Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xingrui Gou for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- From: ShinIchi Esumi <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>
- To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: [Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xingrui Gou for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- Date: Mon, 22 Nov 2021 15:36:03 +0900
Dear Xingrui (and Takafumi)
The followings are comments on your merged talk abstract from conveners.
Best regards, Jiangyong, Prithwish and ShinIchi
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Jiangyong
L7 global polarization has been-->we present differential measurement of global polarization for.. as a function of centrality, pT and eta.
L9 provide...-->allow us to constrain the possible
L11--> you might want to say why the third order event plane measurement is important.
L11 in--> from
L12 brand new-->new
Prithwish
“Global and Local Polarization of Hyperons in 200 GeV Ru+Ru 2 and Zr+Zr Collisions at STAR”
→
“Measurements of Global and Local Polarization of Hyperons in 200 GeV Isobar Collisions from STAR”
“\Lambda global and local polarization” → “the global and local polarization of hyperons”
“large vorticities along the system’s angular momentum directon and the vorticities along the beam direction due to the non-trivial collective velocity field”
→
“large vorticities perpendicular to reaction plane due to systems’s angular momentum and along beam direction due to collective velocity field”
“With the high-statistics 200GeV Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr collision data” → “With the high-statistics data from isobar collisions of Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr at √s_NN=200 GeV”
It is not clear what is meant by “non-trivial collective velocity” so we suggest removing the word “non-trivial”.
“200GeV” → “200 GeV”
“possible magnetic effect” → “possible magnetic field driven effects”
“Difference between Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr” → “Difference between Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr, owing to a larger magnetic field in the former”
“\Lambda hyperon local polarization” → “\Lambda hyperon local polarization along beam direction”
“By comparing to results in Au+Au collisions, they provide brand new insights into” → “A comparison on results from isobar and Au+Au collisions provide important new insights on the”
ShinIchi
I’m OK to sign off.
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