STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Gavin,

Nice slides. I have a few suggestions for your consideration.

Title: you can probably mention either RHIC BES-II or STAR BES-II

slide#5: seen --> observed
"conventional physical mechanisms" --> conventional physics mechanisms 
or, conventional
polarization mechanisms.
"phi meson vector strong force field." --> phi meson strong force field 
or vector meson strong force field.

slide#7: "Polarization in late stage of hadronic interactions" --> 
Different late stage of hadronic interactions. Because I think hadronic 
re-scattering can destroy the polarization signal.

"Correlations between d and s-bar fluctuating vector meson fields .... " 
--> fluctuating vector meson fields for d and s-bar are expected to be 
weaker than s and s-bar

slide#8: Remove validate BES-I. We should stress what are the 
improvements at BES-II than BES-I, e.g. increased statistics, better 
event plane resolution etc. Also later in your slides mention as a 
future outlook that we can increase kinematic coverage in BES-II.

slide#9: Double check the number of events from our recent BUR.
"Improvements to STAR" --> can you be specific here, increased 
acceptance, statistics etc.

slide#11: Mention Run-2019 inside Figure.

slide#12: "Correct yields using efficiency calculated from STAR detector 
and Pythia6 simulations." --> Correct yields using efficiency calculated 
from STAR detector simulations. We probably don't need Pythia6, since it 
is techical part of analysis.

Check the prime symbols after "A" and "B" in the first bullet of right 
box.

"is set by simulation" -->  is determined by simulation

slide#13: Space between 19.6 & GeV. Inside figure mention data taking 
year, rapidity acceptance.

slide#14: Does the model fit include BES-II data?

slide#15: "Consistent with BES-I results." --> Stress on the improvement 
than consistent.

slide#17: You can remove this since you don't have any backups here.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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