STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Zhiwan Xu <zhiwanxu AT physics.ucla.edu>]

Dear Conveners,
 Thank you for the comments. I have modified the abstract according to the 
suggestions, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60079

Best,
Zhiwan

----- Original Message -----
From: "Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Sent: Monday, June 27, 2022 10:55:36 AM
Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Zhiwan Xu for DNP 2022 
submitted for review

Dear Zhiwan,
   Here are my comment on your abstract. With these included I sign-off.

"quark-gluon plasma drops" --> "quark-gluon plasma medium"

"which undergo the chiral magnetic effect  (CME)" --> "which can lead to 
the chiral magnetic effect  (CME)"

"pre-defined  CME  signal  to  be  much smaller  than  previously  
expected" --> "pre-defined  CME  signatures to be absent"

"insufficient to rule out a possible CME signal in Au+Au collisions 
through extrapolation"
-->
"cannot rule out a possible CME signal in Au+Au collisions"

"with various event-shape handles" -- this sentence is not clear?

Best,
Prithwish

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