STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Egor,

Nice results. I have the following comments for your consideration:

slide#2: "with the direction of vorticity" --> along the direction of 
vorticity

slide#6: You can indicate the numbers on the brackets are the 
eta-acceptance

slide#7: Can you increase the figures and fonts of legend?

slide#8: "term is what we’re looking for" --> term is the polarization 
signal.
At which place you apply EP resolution, could you mention here?

slide#9: "Pin-down model at low collision energies" --> Constrain models 
at low collision energies
"High-statistics datasets" --> High-statistics BES-II datasets

slide#10: Suggest re-ordering bullets, first mention main observations, 
ie, non-zero positive Xi polarization, then comparison among species, 
energies, then model at the last
Suggest to remove conference name from the legend of the figure.


slide#11: 1st bullet:  I suggest to mention help understand QCD spin 
dynamics or vorticity of QGP medium"

"helps to check model predictions and theory explanations" --> It can be 
a sub-bullet and you can use something like: data can help constrain 
models.

2nd bullet: "... polarization splitting" --> ... polarization splitting, 
expected from initial magnetic-field

3rd bullet, you can add "....within uncertainties, indicating a global 
nature of polarization"

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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