STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Hu, Yu" <yuhu AT bnl.gov>]

Hi Subhash,

Thanks for your further suggestions, please find a newer version from the link below:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v4.pdf

Best,

Yu

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From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
Sent: Friday, July 22, 2022 23:40
To: Hu, Yu <yuhu AT bnl.gov>
Cc: STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Yu Hu for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Dear Yu,

Thanks for the updated proceedings. I sign off with the following
additional suggestions for your consideration:

line 37: measurement results --> measurements
line 40: Remove "Because the CME is a magnetic-driven effect" or, do a
rephrase.
line 44: isobar collisions
line 47: STAR used the isobar collision systems, ..... .
Then you can remove "to perform the isobar run."
line 48: "For these pairs of isobars" --> Among these isobar species
line 64: The grey point --> The open square (someone with B/W print may
not distinguish)
line 118: estimate an improved background

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-07-23 10:27 AM, Hu, Yu wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
>  Thanks for the suggestions and comments. Please find a new version
> from the link below:
> 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v3.pdf
>
>  Best,
>  Yu
>
> -------------------------
>
> From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Sent: Friday, July 22, 2022 6:36
> To: STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Cc: Hu, Yu <yuhu AT bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Yu Hu for Quark Matter
> 2022 submitted for review
>
> Dear Yu,
>
> Nice proceedings. QM has a strict page limit, please adjust it within
> six pages.
> I have a few suggestions embedded here:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v2_0_SS.pdf
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2022-07-22 01:22 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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