STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Yu,

Since there are no further comments, I am sending it to star-talks.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash
ps: I have discarded the duplicate entry: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60367

On 2022-07-23 12:37 PM, Hu, Yu wrote:
> Hi Subhash,
>
>  Thanks for your further suggestions, please find a newer version from
> the link below:
>  
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v4.pdf
>
>  Best,
>  Yu
>
> -------------------------
>
> From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> Sent: Friday, July 22, 2022 23:40
> To: Hu, Yu <yuhu AT bnl.gov>
> Cc: STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Yu Hu for Quark Matter
> 2022 submitted for review
>
> Dear Yu,
>
> Thanks for the updated proceedings. I sign off with the following
> additional suggestions for your consideration:
>
> line 37: measurement results --> measurements
> line 40: Remove "Because the CME is a magnetic-driven effect" or, do a
>
> rephrase.
> line 44: isobar collisions
> line 47: STAR used the isobar collision systems, ..... .
> Then you can remove "to perform the isobar run."
> line 48: "For these pairs of isobars" --> Among these isobar species
> line 64: The grey point --> The open square (someone with B/W print
> may
> not distinguish)
> line 118: estimate an improved background
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
> On 2022-07-23 10:27 AM, Hu, Yu wrote:
> > Dear Subhash,
> >
> >  Thanks for the suggestions and comments. Please find a new version
> > from the link below:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v3.pdf
> [1]
> >  Best,
> >  Yu
> >
> > -------------------------
> >
> > From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
> > Sent: Friday, July 22, 2022 6:36
> > To: STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> > Cc: Hu, Yu <yuhu AT bnl.gov>
> > Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Yu Hu for Quark
> Matter
> > 2022 submitted for review
> >
> > Dear Yu,
> >
> > Nice proceedings. QM has a strict page limit, please adjust it
> within
> > six pages.
> > I have a few suggestions embedded here:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v2_0_SS.pdf
> [2]
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-07-22 01:22 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Yu Hu (yuhu AT bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a review, please
> > have
> > > a
> > > look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60368
> > >
> > > ---
> > > If you have any problems with the review process, please contact
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>
> Links:
> ------
> [1] 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v3.pdf
> [2] 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM22_proceeding_YuHu_CME_v2_0_SS.pdf