STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Joey,

Very nicely written proceedings and I enjoy reading it. I have a few 
comments for your consideration:

In general, we include physics figures in the proceedings, especially 
new measurements. I understand there are substantial number figures and 
you probably try to avoid it due to page limit.

The abstract can be shortened a bit.

line 77: these discussions (?)

line 82: mass-square information

line 84: "a series of conditions" --> You could mention 
KFP/helix/topology cuts and/or refer to previous studies.

line. 85: quite pure --> You could add typical purity achieved.

line 90: double the resolution --> Do you mean Psi1?

line 95: how about saying traditional invariant mass-method?

line 154: you could mention "within uncertainties."

line 167: I don't understand what do you mean by "there also recover the 
familiar differential dependencies." You could rephrase it.

line 176: voriticity formation within the medium formed in heavy ion 
collisions.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash



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