STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[rishabh <rishabh AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you so much for your valuable suggestions. I have implemented them 
in the updated draft of the proceeding that you can find on the link: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60567.

> line 61: "the mass number scaling within 20-30%." --> mention the pt/A 
> range
The quoted deviation of 20-30% is for the entire studied pt/A range.

Please let me know if you have any further suggestions.

Thanks and regards,
Rishabh



On 2022-08-20 08:41, subhash via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Rishabh,
>
> Nice proceedings. I have following suggestions for your consideration:
>
> line 27: You could mention Beam Energy Scan in this line.
> line 29: detectors.
> line 31: allows the identification of ...
> using a restriction on the mass-square (m2) of the particle.
> line 32: It help improve particle ....
> line 34: from
> line 42: ... first order event plane determined by ...
> line 44: remove "emitted in heavy-ion collisions"
> line 61: "the mass number scaling within 20-30%." --> mention the pt/A 
> range
> line 63: as a function of rapidity (y) for ...
> remove "measured"
> line 64: Rephrase it to something like, Hyper-nuclei nuclei v1 results
> are compared with that of light nuclei ...
> line 65-66: Linear fits are shown ... for other light nuclei species"
> --> rephrase this line.
> line 75: that coalescence could be the dominant mechanism for 
> hyper-nuclei
> line 78 and 82: mention the beam energies
>
> For figures: You could mention statistical and systematic
> uncertainties in captions.
>
> I sign off once these are addressed.
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
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