STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[vipul <vipul AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Subhash,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.
I have modified the proceedings. Please find the updated version in the 
following link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ICHEP_proceedings_Vipul_v2.pdf

Please find my replies on some of your comments inline below.

Thanks,
With regards,
Vipul

On 2022-10-16 07:20, subhash wrote:
> Dear Vipul,
>
> Nice proceedings. I sign off with a few minor suggestions:
> In abstract:
> 200 GeV, try to void line break.
>
> The ratio of ⟨v2⟩ between isobar species shows ... deformation in these 
> species.
>
> systematic size dependence --> system size dependence
>
> line 16: ... RHIC collected data by colliding isobar species Ru+Ru and
> Zr+Zr at 200 GeV.
> Start a new line: It is dedicated to ....
>
> line 24: could be crucial
>
> line 33: A total of ∼650 M minimum bias events --> I think we should
> mention total samples taken. You could rephrase something like, A
> total of ∼650 M minimum bias events out of X.X B are used for this
> analysis.
-- Could you please provide number of total events for isobars (X.X) to 
write.
> line 34: Either use The multi-strange hadrons or, the above hadron 
> species ...
>
> line 36:  using a track rotation method
>
> line 38: add ranges of eta-sub selection
-- Please suggest a sentence to write.
> line 44: particle type dependence (baryon vs meson)
>
> line 55: About 2% ... is observed, which is consistent with the
> expectation from the difference ...
>
> line 65: It also indicates that the ...
> I think we could mention pt range where the coalescence picture is 
> valid.
-- In this paragraph, I am discussing the NCQ scaling of v2 as a 
function of KE_T in which the scaling is valid for the measured KE_T 
range that can be seen by the figure 5. I don't know where I can mention 
pt range in these sentences, If possible, please suggest a modified 
sentence.

> line 83: These measurements could shed light ...
>
> I think we don't need a dot at the end of each reference. Please
> double check with suggested proceedings format.
-- I have checked the author manual provided by the Proceedings of 
Science. It has a dot at the end of each reference.

> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
>
>
>
> On 2022-10-14 07:13 PM, vipul via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear Prithwish,
> >
> > Thank you your comments and suggestions.
> > I have updated the proceedings and removed the older version. Please
> > find the link to the updated proceedings.
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ICHEP_proceedings_Vipul_v1.pdf
> >
> > I have added following sentence for the v2 ratio between Ru and Zr:
> > A $\sim$2\% deviation from unity with a significance of 6.25$\sigma$
> > for $\Lambda(\bar{\Lambda})$ and 1.83$\sigma$ for $K_{s}^{0}$ is
> > observed,
> > consistent with the difference between the nuclear structures of the
> > two isobar nuclei.
> >
> > Fig.4 and 6 has both the error added in quadrature. So I have added
> > following sentence:
> > The error bars represent statistical and systematic uncertainties
> > added in quadrature.
> >
> > Fig.5 has both the systematic and statistical errors shown separately.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > With Regards,
> > Vipul
> >
> > On 2022-10-14 03:21, Prithwish Tribedy wrote:
> > > Dear Vipul,
> > >  Here are my comments on your nice proceedings. With these
> > > incorporated, I sign off.
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > > "indicating a difference" --> "that is consistent with the 
> > > difference"
> > >
> > > "when compared" --> "when comparing" or say "...between isobar and
> > > ..(other) systems"
> > >
> > > line 4: "the key observable" --> "one of the key observables"
> > >
> > > line 6: "Anisotropic flow is usually refers to" --> "Such an
> > > observable measures"
> > >
> > > line 12: "re-scattering" --> "rescatterings"
> > >
> > > line 14: "during" --> "in"
> > >
> > > line 16: "data of" --> "data in collisions of isobars"
> > >
> > > line 18: "called the" --> "driven by a phenomenon called the"
> > >
> > > line 18: "The two isobars" --> "It was realized that the two isobars"
> > >
> > > line 20: "importantly measurement" --> "importantly, measurements"
> > >
> > > line 24: You are saying "in heavy-ion collisions" should you instead
> > > say "in isobar collisions"
> > >
> > > line 26: "respect the event" --> "respect to the event"
> > >
> > > line 30: "and properties of" --> "and the properties of"
> > >
> > > line 32: "proceeding" --> "proceedings"
> > >
> > > line 41: "shows pT" --> "shows the pT"
> > >
> > > line 44: "which suggest the formation of the" --> "which suggests the
> > > formation of a"
> > > I think this point about "QGP medium in isobar" is redundant.
> > >
> > > line 48: Add "v2(pT) of" after "show" & revise the sentence
> > >
> > > line 55: It is not clear what you mean by "2% within statistical
> > > uncertainties". Are you saying "2% deviation that statistically
> > > significant". Or, maybe you quote the significance of the deviation 
> > > to
> > > make things clear. Something like "about 6 sigma for "\Lambdas" but
> > > less than 2 sigma for K_s0". Please make this clear.
> > >
> > > Fig.4 and below: Somewhere you have to mention that you're showing
> > > statistical uncertainties only.
> > >
> > > line 56: "which might be effect of different deformation parameters"
> > > --> Maybe rephrase it like "consistent with the difference between 
> > > the
> > > nuclear structures of the two isobar nuclei".
> > >
> > > line 61: "remove effect of" --> "remove the effect of"
> > >
> > > line 64: Define NCQ
> > >
> > > line 65: "indicate" --> "indicates"
> > >
> > > line 65: "dominate" --> "dominant"
> > >
> > > line 66: Remove "process"
> > >
> > > line 76: "and three" --> "and in three"
> > >
> > > line 78: "hydrodynamics" --> "hydrodynamic"
> > >
> > > line 80: "dominate" --> "dominant"
> > >
> > > line 84: "nuclear density for the medium produced" --> Not clear what
> > > you mean. Maybe say something like "collision geometry on anisotropic
> > > particle production".
> > >
> > > Best,
> > > Prithwish
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > On 2022-10-10 11:46, vipul via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > Dear Conveners,
> > > >
> > > > Please find below link to the ICHEP-2022 proceedings.
> > > > Please give your comments and suggestions.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > > With Regards,
> > > > Vipul
> > > >
> > > > On 2022-10-10 21:03, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > > >
> > > > > Vipul Bairathi (vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com) has submitted a material 
> > > > > for a
> > > > > review, please have a look:
> > > > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61281
> > > > >
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