STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Ding Chen <dchen087 AT ucr.edu>]

Dear Prithwish,

Thank you for your kind comments and resources. I've updated the slides accordingly in version 4. Let me know if you have any further comments.

Thanks,

Ding

On Sun, Oct 23, 2022 at 5:55 PM Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Ding,
   Your slides look very good. Below are a few comments from my side.
With these included, I sign off.

Slide#3:
"From the first" --> "From the STAR measurements using the first"
"in STAR (BES-I)" -> "(BES-I)"
"How are" --> "How about"
"to early stage" --> "to the early stages"
"From BES-I it also shows hint of"
->"STAR BES-1 measurements also show hints of"

Slide#4: I think this cartoon is not the best one to point to Endcap
TOF. You might find some figures of the STAR experimental setup here:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/gptrjsndbepcjq4/rhic_highlights2_mit_townhall_2022.pptx?dl=0

"at 7.2 GeV" --> "in √s_{NN}=7.2 GeV"

Slide#6: "through by from TPC dE/dx" --> "using dE/dx from TPC"

Slide#7: "Plot" --> "We compare measurements of"
"lever arm to improve liner fit" --> "wider lever arm in pseudorapidity
& improve the linear fit"

Slide#10: "shows sign of turning negative to positive" -> "shows
indication of sign change from negative to positive, with improved
precision compared to the BES-I data"

There maybe a better way of saying what you meant by "connect well". I
don't have a good suggestion. You can add "in rapidity" after "connect
well".

"combine" --> "combined data from" or "combining measurements from"

Add "around √s_{NN}=10 GeV" before "will help" in the last bullet. You
can also add "using more BES-II FXT data" at the end of this sentence to
make your point more clear.


Slide#11:
"data" --> "datasets" sounds better
Remove "as well as COL data" and add "& COL" after "FXT"
"will have PID" --> "with PID"


Best,
Prithwish








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