STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Shengli,
  Nice abstract. Here are my comments. With these included, I sign-off 
your talk.

heavy ion --> heavy-ion
uncertaities --> uncertainties

This sentence may require some revising:
"of initial geometry due to the internal nucleonic structure and
its fluctuations"
How about:
"associated with the description of initial geometry and fluctuations at 
the sub-nucleonic scale"

"final measurements" --> "measurements"

"coverage of" --> "coverage of the"

"both in the mid-rapidity and" --> "at mid-rapidity using a relative 
pseudorapidity separation of"

"It will avoid" --> "The kinematics of our measurements help avoid"

"dynamics contribution" --> "decorrelation"

"nucleonic or sub-nucleonic" --> "nucleonic vs. sub-nucleonic (?)"

Best,
Prithwish

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