STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Rishabh Sharma ( rishabhsharma AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/XXV-DAE-BRNS-HEP-SYMPOSIUM/Elliptic-flow-light-nuclei-AuAu-collisions-146-196-27-and-0

Comment:
Hi Rishabh,

Nice proceeding. I sign off with few suggestions
- Title: using the STAR detector -> from STAR
- line 10: , and  their -> . Their
- line 14: helps understand -> helps to understand
- line 53: minimum bias -> 0-80% centrality; same in Figure 1 caption
- line 54: increase in v2 of light nuclei with pT... -> increase with pT in  
v2 of light nuclei is observed across
- line 60&61&76&77: remove 'more'

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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