STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[zhchen <zhchen AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

It's ok to keep the original one.

Cheers,
Zhenyu

在 2023-07-08 15:28，rishabh via Star-fcv-l 写道：
> Dear Zhenyu,
>
> Thank you so much for your comments and the sign-off. I have
> implemented them in the updated draft here:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64246
>
> Regarding the title of the proceedings, I have maintained the same
> title that was used during the abstract submission and presentation.
> Please suggest if you would prefer me to adopt the title you suggested
> or retain the original one from the abstract.
>
> Thanks again.
> Best regards,
> Rishabh
>
>
>
> On 2023-07-08 12:23, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> > originally
> > submitted by Rishabh Sharma ( 
> > rishabhsharma AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in ) at
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/XXV-DAE-BRNS-HEP-SYMPOSIUM/Elliptic-flow-light-nuclei-AuAu-collisions-146-196-27-and-0
> >
> > Comment:
> > Hi Rishabh,
> >
> > Nice proceeding. I sign off with few suggestions
> > - Title: using the STAR detector -> from STAR
> > - line 10: , and  their -> . Their
> > - line 14: helps understand -> helps to understand
> > - line 53: minimum bias -> 0-80% centrality; same in Figure 1 caption
> > - line 54: increase in v2 of light nuclei with pT... -> increase with 
> > pT in
> > v2 of light nuclei is observed across
> > - line 60&61&76&77: remove 'more'
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Zhenyu
> >
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