STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[psinha <psinha AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Zhenyu,

Thank you for the suggestions and sign off. Kindly find the updated 
version at the link below.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/XXV-DAE-BRNS-HEP-SYMPOSIUM/Probing-nuclear-structure-using-elliptic-flow-strange-and-0

Regards,
Priyanshi

On 2023-07-08 12:49, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Priyanshi Sinha ( 
> priyanshisinha AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in )
> at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/XXV-DAE-BRNS-HEP-SYMPOSIUM/Probing-nuclear-structure-using-elliptic-flow-strange-and-0
>
> Comment:
> Hi Priyanshi,
>
> Nice proceeding. I sign off with few suggestions
> - line 11: in these isobar collisions -> in the two isobar collision 
> systems
> - line 12: the two isobar nuclei -> the two nuclei
> - line 13: add 'particles' at the end of the line
> - line 15: the results to Cu+Cu -> the results to those in Cu+Cu
> - line 22: remove 'and collectivity'; run at -> run of Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr
> - line 25: structures between the nuclei -> nuclear structure
> - line 34: both -> each of
> - line 47: both the -> both
> - line 54: remove '-'
> - line 59: a clear -> clear
> - line 61: minimum bias -> 0-80% centrality
> - line 64: remove 'incoming'; add 'The' before v2
> - line 65: in Cu+Cu -> v2 in Cu+Cu
> - line 68: add 'particles' before 'in Ru+Ru'
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
>
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