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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Priyanshi Sinha ( priyanshisinha AT students.iisertirupati.ac.in )  
at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/XXV-DAE-BRNS-HEP-SYMPOSIUM/Probing-nuclear-structure-using-elliptic-flow-strange-and-0

Comment:
Hi Priyanshi,

Nice proceeding. I sign off with few suggestions
- line 11: in these isobar collisions -> in the two isobar collision systems
- line 12: the two isobar nuclei -> the two nuclei
- line 13: add 'particles' at the end of the line
- line 15: the results to Cu+Cu -> the results to those in Cu+Cu
- line 22: remove 'and collectivity'; run at -> run of Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr
- line 25: structures between the nuclei -> nuclear structure
- line 34: both -> each of
- line 47: both the -> both
- line 54: remove '-'
- line 59: a clear -> clear
- line 61: minimum bias -> 0-80% centrality
- line 64: remove 'incoming'; add 'The' before v2
- line 65: in Cu+Cu -> v2 in Cu+Cu
- line 68: add 'particles' before 'in Ru+Ru'

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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