STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Egor Alpatov <egroker1 AT gmail.com>]

Dear  Zhenyu,

Thank you for comments.
I implemented them and uploaded newer version to drupal: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DSPIN-2023_0.pdf

Best regards,
Egor Alpatov

On Tue, Aug 22, 2023 at 6:33 AM webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by Egor Alpatov ( egroker1 AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/DSPIN-2023/Global-polarization-Xi-hyperons-AuAu-collisions-STAR-experimant-0

Comment:
Dear Egor,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- Slide3: you have space to spell out "HIC"
- Slide7: bottom right, figures have x-axis title cut off
- Slide8-10: title font is different from the rest of slides
- Slide8&9: will it be helpful to include a dash line at 0 on the figures?
- Slide8: observable -> obvious
- Slide10: "non-zero" and "positive", in the same sentence you only need one 
of them
- Slide10: there is no legend for square markers on the figure
- Slide10: model predictions -> AMPT model predictions

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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