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Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-

Comment:
Dear Xiaoyu,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- General: I would suggest not using all capital letters in the titles, at  
least hard to read for me :)
- Slide2: add few words for the key points of the slide
- Slide3: coalescence rule -> coalescence
- Slide4: momentum points -> momentum direction
- Slide7: but exhibits -> and exhibits
- Slide8: would it be helpful to explain how odd and even terms are  
calculated?
- Slide9: remove "rule"
- Slide12: vertex -> collision vertex
- Slide13: the vertical dash lines need legend

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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