STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Xiaoyu,

Your slides are in a very good shape. I have only a few additional 
suggestion for your consideration:

s#8: It might be good to indicate UrQMD settings, eg Cascade mode with 
any EoS etc. Also add a reference of their paper.

s#12: You can add a line or an equation, how odd and even is separated.

s#13: You can add JAM reference or version. Recently, we saw JAM1 vs 
JAM2 show very different trends for v1.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-08-27 12:55 PM, Liu, Xiaoyu via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hello Zhenyu,
>
>  Thanks for your comments!
>
>  I have incorporated all your comments. I have also made other changes
> based on the feedbacks from PAs. The latest version can be found at
> the same drupal page:
>
>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$
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>  Thanks,
>  Xiaoyu
>
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> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material
> originally
> submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
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> Comment:
> Dear Xiaoyu,
>
> Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
> - General: I would suggest not using all capital letters in the
> titles, at
> least hard to read for me :)
> - Slide2: add few words for the key points of the slide
> - Slide3: coalescence rule -> coalescence
> - Slide4: momentum points -> momentum direction
> - Slide7: but exhibits -> and exhibits
> - Slide8: would it be helpful to explain how odd and even terms are
> calculated?
> - Slide9: remove "rule"
> - Slide12: vertex -> collision vertex
> - Slide13: the vertical dash lines need legend
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
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