STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Liu, Xiaoyu" <liu.6566 AT buckeyemail.osu.edu>]

Hello Zhenyu, 

Thanks for your comments! 

I have incorporated all your comments. I have also made other changes based on the feedbacks from PAs. The latest version can be found at the same drupal page:

https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$

Thanks,

Xiaoyu 

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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/First-order-event-plane-correlated-v1-and-v3-BES-II-AuAu-collisions-__;!!KGKeukY!xIKQ_AtDmmy2uXcPvS_1kokWf89slul06yws5m-bndjzb3d3flUmazcyFVxnkLbAtV_ExHSPyLizubsZTIAWnKP9XI0eWAmcFo6p9i0$

Comment:
Dear Xiaoyu,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- General: I would suggest not using all capital letters in the titles, at 
least hard to read for me :)
- Slide2: add few words for the key points of the slide
- Slide3: coalescence rule -> coalescence
- Slide4: momentum points -> momentum direction
- Slide7: but exhibits -> and exhibits
- Slide8: would it be helpful to explain how odd and even terms are 
calculated?
- Slide9: remove "rule"
- Slide12: vertex -> collision vertex
- Slide13: the vertical dash lines need legend

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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