STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Grazyna Odyniec <g_odyniec AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Vipul,

I was asked by STAR management to review a few posters for QM, yours is 
one of them.

Below are my comments/suggestion for your nice poster. My comments are 
mostly related to the clarity of the presentation.

Title:

… in isobar collisions at RHIC - STAR”

You are presenting STAR results, so it should be stated clearly, I suggest:

… in isobar collisions from STAR experiment at RHIC”

or even better:

… in isobar collisions Ru+Ru and Zr+Zr from STAR experiment at RHIC”

Experiment:

Is 3.8B a total number of events (Zr+Ru)? Is it the same number of 
events in both datasets ?

Motivation:

I think you want say that

Elliptic flow (v2) of … gives information on:

-Initial state anisotropies

-insight into the nuclear density and deformation ... etc

-system size dependence of the system evolution

Is this correct? If it is, please, modify that it says so (for example 
like the above).

That will allow you to avoid repeating “Elliptic flow gives ...” in 
every line.

BTW: I would suggest changing “gives” to “provides”

The figures in this window (still Motivation) need a little bit of 
explanation:

Left side figures:

Bottom: it is a ratio of what?

Right side plots:

Top: what is 1%, 2%, 5%?

Bottom: Usually, data would be shown by solid symbols, and models by 
open ones. If you can, please, change it to follow this.

[It is a little bit confusing at present, because one model and data are 
shown in similar way (by open symbols), and another model in different 
one (by solids].

Methodology:

Left:

Can you add two vertical lines for Phi invariant mass plot, as you 
haveit for K0, that it will show what range of invariant mass was included ?

It needs conclusions: what we see

Right:

Resolution of what? You need to write that this is a reaction plane 
resolution.

You can also comment that it is very similar for Ru and Zr (and 
different for both heavier systems)

Best regards,

Grazyna Odyniec / LBNL

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