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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Yicheng Feng ( feng216 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Background-Control-and-Upper-Limit-Chiral-Magnetic-Effect-Isobar-Col

Comment:
Dear Yicheng,

Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
- General: footers are overlapping
- Slide3: Ru and Zr -> Ru and Zr collisions; EP res. -> EP resolution; isobar 
 
differences -> collision system differences; various non-flow -> Study(?)  
various non-flow; upper limit -> Set upper limit
- Slide4: isobars -> isobar collision systems; in other -> in the other
- Slide5: isobar ratio of ... -> ratio of ... in Ru and Zr collisions
- Slide6: same as above
- Slide9: add few words to deliver the key points of the slide

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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